Outline
Introduction:
- Attention Getter:
Thesis: To be stated later..
Preview: Apparently women like flying too?!
Main Point:
- Ads audience is focussed on women
- Published in a woman’s magazine (Ladies' Home Journal)
- Woman in front
- “Mother’s too!”
- Leave the kids behind
- but the men still has a strong hand in it
- “Now Dad can take..” “Family Man”
Preview: The “ideal” family...
Main Point:
- Family driven (Happy, ideal family, smiling, in line)
- Colors (vivid/bright and happy
- Angle (allows you to envision yourself as part of the family)
- Figures (realistic)
- Script (handwriting, homey)
- Questioning (“is it any wonder family men are so enthusiastic about flagship travel?”)
Conclusion:
- Success: advertising towards housewives of the time, making it about family
- Fail: still made the men the focus
All of the points you have are good and will easily get you to a thesis. Since we talked about them in class I know where you're going with them and you're definitely going in the right direction. I think you need to focus your thesis on the ad being geared towards women and the variety of ways that that happens.
ReplyDeleteOh! Don't forget your internal citations and reference list:)
ReplyDeleteLooks good so far! Just don't forget to have your references and transitions (: I like how you broke up your two main points and then talk about which devices associate with it!
ReplyDeleteI feel like your outline is way more put together than mine! good for you! I think the way it is broken up makes it much more easier to follow and is organized in a very clear way!
ReplyDeleteI think what you have here is good pieces to work with. Yes, you still need a thesis and hopefully that will come easy since you have a good amount of contextual evidence. Other than that I think you have a good ad and outline to work with.
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