Links to rhetorical tools:

Here are links to the rhetorical tools used in this class:

Schemes & Tropes -- Perelman & Olbrechts-Tyteca -- Fallacies -- Burke -- Rhetorical Toolbox -- Conspiracy Rhetorics

Wednesday, September 22, 2021

The Man, The Myth, The Legend (Not for Rhetoric Also)

     WHO?!?!

    Many people may know him, but if you don't.... I will HAPPILY make your lives a lot better. This man goes by the name of Stephen A. Smith, he is a sports analyst on the his very own show on ESPN called First Take. He is very well known in the world of basketball because of his rants and opinions that time to time can be very humorous. 

    Now I don't necessarily want to be a journalist, to be honest with you I don't even know what I want to do with my communications degree. When it comes to anybody I respect in the field of communications the only person I can think of is Stephen A. Smith. he doesn't necessarily make blog posts anymore since he has a podcast and a show to keep up with constantly; But when he started pursuing the dream of becoming a sports-caster, he made his name through blog posts and newspaper articles in Philadelphia.

What's the Point?!?

    Now enough with the back story, lets get to the whole reason on why you brought yourself here. When it came to Stephen A Smith's Blogs he connected with the audience on a personal level. When you read his text it seems as if you are sitting at a table across from him discussing last nights game. it really is captivating how he his choice of diction can transcend his charisma through the text. 

    The way he formatted his blog was very old school but hey, I mean the blog posts were published before 2010 which we can all agree was a very awkward time for style in general. here let me make a point, since we are talking about Stephen A. Smith here is an example in relation to basketball. 


    I know, I know, I got side tracked. But y'all forced my hand! I thought y'all wouldn't believe me on the style back then. Nevertheless, The formatting of his blog is very simple and easy to the eye. 

What does he even talk about?!?

When looking into the content of what he posts, he seems to consistently have a piece on a marquee matchup that he goes over when he talks about the NBA. These pieces would usually consist of big names that had big games. Following that piece he will then have another section that talks about any other sport at any given time, depending on which league has big news to talk about. Following that he then has a NBA notes section that always caps off his blog posts. this can contain trading rumors, interviews he had with coaches, etc... after the first three pieces he then goes and expands on other sports like football, olympic swimming, the list goes on.

What made his content special was how unfiltered he is when delivering it. I swear to you, if you go watch a random youtube video and watch some of his work on First Take, go back and read his blog... You can damn near hear his voice. its crazy to me how animated he can be with his writing. 

That's It?!? 

Im sorry guys but there is not much more to his blogs other then him discussing the games of the day with his audience. BUT WAIT! I can save you the trouble: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PrnrxJZ6SrQ

There, there, you can now enjoy some of Stephen A. Smith's funniest moments. Don't worry you can thank me later on the next blog! This is David and... We out!

- David Aguilera





APS Thesis Introduction and Career Analysis (this is not for rhetoric)

           Hello! 

 I'm back on here to re-introduce myself and my ideas for a pre-senior thesis. Or as I just found out, an analysis of a ceramics blog, which is what I want to do when i'm a sad 25 year old. You may be asking, why does Caroline, a literal communications major, want to go into ceramics?? Well I've found my passion, and i'm tired of pretending to be content avoiding anything that has to do with art in school.

 Communications is a great supporting system that should keep my future business afloat, and the connections that i'll be able to make with Communication Studies as a degree will be a helluva lot more beneficial than simply knowing how to make stuff with squishy dirt. As for someone I can look to with a blog in ceramics... I really don't want to use a famous ceramicist to base my writings on. I wish the local artists that I've found at ClayFest were bloggers... Found one! David Hendley is a local potter with a home built kiln. He has an extensive website and information on a plethora of his hand-made ceramic pieces, which I see fit to classify as an unkept blog.   
  
 His knowledge comes with age, and the philosophy of the information he wrote about his work is very deep and detailed. I appreciate the commitment and story-written method that he uses to walk a reader through his process, and its more encapsulating than people's blogs that are based in other careers such as marketing, graphic design, or being a communications professor. 


 So, it seems that when I become a local ceramic artist, I'm going to have the best blog out of every other ceramicist, because I'll be the only one with a blog! And of course, I'll have invigorating knowledge from my experiences at TLU. I might even be a professional speaker (on top of my pottery career) who uses rhetorical analyses and has a really cool social media presence as well! 

Back to the "now". I'm developing my senior thesis based on food insecurity and how it can affect college students, and whether or not students even know they could be food insecure (and more). I have 2 scholarly articles as well as a website organization that I'm going to be using, each of which contrasts from the other so I don't end up recycling information. I plan to use a questionnaire around different campuses when my time comes so I can gather a lot of anonymous information that makes trends easier to determine. I need a lot of effort to develop this questionnaire, and structure it so that it gathers aspects of food insecurity like accessibility, income, and tuition; Otherwise, it wouldn't be detailed enough to gather significant data. This topic is well known, but not by its label. People go through food insecurity without even knowing what it is, and people witness it with the same lack of knowledge. Attaching a name to this issue and giving it the strength it needs to be impactful is a big jump, but at least I'd be broadcasting even if it's on a small scale. 

Wednesday, May 5, 2021

Final slides

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/12G0lBBwmJlDvxOUqCo_r0PLrNgG3Vf0KpS38MRk7TqA/edit?usp=sharing 

Monday, May 3, 2021

Rwandan genocide

  Attention getter: Words of Grace Mukasekuru explaining how bad the situation was and how she was separated from her family

-What was the Genocide (switch to pictures)


*Establish credibility

(Who am i and why am I qualified) "I'm David and I have been..."


Thesis: How White Privilege caused and allowed the Rwandan Genocide to happen.


Pictures

Premise/ Premise modifier:

Presumptions are made based on 

-Draws attention to Frances neglect towards Rwanda

Succession 

-Pragmatic with evaluation of France's actions


Conclusion

-White privilege caused the Rwandan Genocide by dehumanizing black people at all points throughout the colonization of the country to 

Trevor Nealeigh- Final Social Movement Presentation Outline

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O_mwhzLirka4NqtoCbcDsTrA5-4Ffv4r92BPLXvzxBA/edit

Slideworks Free the Nipple

These aren’t all of my slides






 

Outline Free the Nipple

 What- campaign enforcing male and female equality, and de-sexualizing the female breast and nipple (Breastfeeding, elimination of rape culture… “asking for it”)


Why- seeks out change in the law and social norm of women being topless.“If men are able to exist in a public space while being topless; devoid of judgement or violation of law, then why can’t women exist while being topless in the same way (without judgement or violation of law)?”


 interchangeable answers because it is not universal for everyone


Goals- obtaining a non-sexual perception of the female nipple by enforcing the normalcy of exposed female breasts/toplessness, promoting public breastfeeding and eliminating rape culture 


I know this from… signs, protest interviews and an academic journal


Many supporters of the FTNM are not just wishing to ‘go around topless’


Goals are shaded by the boldness of members- unforgiving demeanor, not what many people who support the movement agree with


Scales of movement


Idea- calls itself a campaign, protests and social media 


Radicality- not known for violence, arrests, civil disobedience and violation of law to make point- 


Organization- social media presence and websites dictates, not tyranny (no revolutionists leading) celebrities persuade people into being more accepting of the FTNM


Demands- non-sexual perception of the female nipple by enforcing the normalcy of exposed female breasts/toplessness, equality between men and women, promoting public breastfeeding and eliminating rape culture and the fallacy that a woman is “asking for it” depending on her clothing/nudity- but these are unclear because of misinterpretation on supporting and non supporting sides 



Ideographs- ! “Free the Nipple'' itself -just ‘freeing the nipple’ does not reflect the messages and goals that are meant to be sent from the people supporting the movement. 


Gotopless.org uses “free the breast, free the mind” as an ideograph symbolizing its movement, and connection with “free the mind” from claiming to have a spiritual leader of the movement itself…



Values- are used to promote the campaign of FTN, and used frequently in signs, protests and social media as universal truths


based on equality, change of social norms, change of laws, destruction of rape culture and promotion of public breastfeeding


innately pushing participants in the movement to act upon these values, leads them into believing that their actions are justified 


Abstract Values- promoting change and in a way, a revolution, not concrete because it is not using people or an object to build it’s values upon, and it is not  ‘unique’ because the values it uses are claimed by members to already be universal. 


Comparison- compare itself to the seeming normalcy of men being able to exist freely/without consequence in public while being topless. Good job of comparing the realities for men and for women when it comes to toplessness, but— this assertion is mainly a claim born from the movement, holding more power than it would alone because it is connected so deeply with the FTNM. 


Thesis- core values of the FTNM are in some ways used as a method of persuading people to take actions for the movement that they normally would not commit to by themselves… protests, 

Example breastfeeding support- misconception that breasts are not meant for babies, 

signs and protesters claim bodies and boobs aren’t sexual, but they can be if that’s what someone with boobs would like. 

support the implied values and goals of the Free the Nipple movement, but some of the methods and beliefs should be open for dispute rather than condemned to the pre-disclosed opinions that the FTNM was built upon. 











Final Slides

 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VWksUxgwyQUbJpC2q1Vt4ZC2V0lGU6EwS624FymR4JE/edit?usp=sharing


2000s Feminist Anti war speaking outline

 Attention getter 

  • President Bush's ultimatum after 9/11 was  'If you're not with us, you're against us'

Introduction 

  • After 9/11 the United States was in a dark place. After losing almost 3,000 Americans. Bush was ready for revenge so After the attack and the country to head into the Iraq and Afghanistan wars that have killed over 7,000 troops to date. But there are some colorful and lovely ladies fighting to bring it to an end from the beginning. During this time 2 feminist anti-war groups were formed. The raging grannies and  the missile dicks chicks

Thesis: 

  • Both organizations were built on wanting to stand out and make a statement.  The leaders of these movements want to challenge stereotypes placed on women and fight for what they believed as an unjust war. Their use of rhetorical schemes, tropes, and visuals help set their movement apart from the rest. 

Preview: 

  • Today we will look at how these organizations The raging grannies, the missile dicks chicks ,. created performance activism that breaks the normal stereotypes placed on women in today's society. 

Credibility:

  • I have been studying voomans charts for a semester and I'm ready to start summer 

#1 

Raging grannies 

  • Began in 1986 

  • Marched through toys are us 

  • Schemes

    • Parallelisms-isocolon

      •  Parallelism with a similar number of words or syllables

    •  balance-antithesis-sign


  • Premises

    • Presumptions- the normal


    • Loci-Quantity

  • Premise Modifiers

    • Repetition


  • Succession- A cause-and-effect argument

  • Slippery Slope

    • A series of steps in a causal chain and the support/ probabilities for each is omitted in an argument that A basically causes Z

#2 

Missile Dick Chicks

  • Formed in 2003 

  • Dress in shiny red, white, and blue costumes and have “missile dicks” coming out of their groin Enumeratio- Detailing parts or arguments.

  •  

epistrophe

Repetition of words at the ends of successive clauses.

 

  • Premises Homogenous-Greater is better 

Interpretive Schemes

Limit the context of interpretation to gain clarity.

  • exaggeration-hyperbole-Using exaggerated terms for effect.

Toolbox" Concept) Analysis: 

  • Norman rockwell analysis “rockwellein

  • Rockwell would use a small detail to tell a whole story while challenging stereotypes and 

Idea 

The idea behind these protests is that they all want the wars overseas to stop and they are using different social norms and breaking them to play into how people think they should behave to get a reaction 

Radicality

Overall most of their protests were peaceful with a few arrests 

Organization

All of the organization that went into forming these three groups where just ladys that were tired of not being heard and most of them are long time advocates for peace 

Demands 

There demands in the beginning of the organization where clear now and it was the opposition to the iraq war but it doesn't seem to me like they have a mission they are just active in the community


final outline - black panther movement

 

 Final Outline

 

Jacqueline Mora

Rhetoric

Mr.Vrooman

 

Thesis: The black panther also known as the black panther party was a political organization founded in 1966. Etc

Preview: Today we will be looking at the black panther party revolution and what their beliefs and struggles were.

 

Overview:

-What occurred during the movement.

-what happened to the founders

-what was the ultimate goal of the movement.

- what were the effects of it.

 

Conclusion:

What the goal of the black panther party was and did they achieve it.

Citations:

The Black Panther Manifesto by Eldridge Cleaver, 1970. *The Black Panther Manifesto* by Eldridge Cleaver, 1970. | DPLA. (n.d.). https://dp.la/primary-source-sets/the-black-power-movement/sources/390.

 

Duncan, Garrett Albert. "Black Panther Party". Encyclopedia Britannica, 9 Feb. 2021, https://www.britannica.com/topic/Black-Panther-Party. Accessed 3 May 2021.

 

The Black Panther Party: Challenging Police and Promoting Social Change. National Museum of African American History and Culture. (2020, August 23). https://nmaahc.si.edu/blog-post/black-panther-party-challenging-police-and-promoting-social-change.

 

Slutwalk outline

 Introduction

Attention getter

Slut-Noun-Disparaging and Offensive. a person, especially a woman, who is sexually promiscuous.

Synonyms-hooker, whore, mammy, mule, sapphire, hoe,tramp, skank

History 

  • The Slut Walks movement started in  2011 
  • “I've been told I'm not supposed to say this. 
  • Since the first walk in April of 2011 in Toronto there have been hundreds of slutwalks that happened in Canada, United States, Latin America, Europe, Australia, and Asia.  


Thesis

The slutwalk movement was successful with bringing awareness to rape culture and victium blaming. Even though the Slutwalks had good intentions it lacked in incorporating all races and ethnicities of women and for this reason the rhetoric of bringing “slut” back and revamping the term is not working for but against the movement. 


Preview

  • I will be looking at three different sources through schemes and tropes, Parlem and Tyteca charts, fallacies, and rhetoric theories. The three sources that will be looked at today are the London Slutwalk advertisement poster, a protest sign, and a letter written from the Black Women blueprint to the Slutwalk movement. 

Credibility

  • I am someone who has been in Vrooman class for the last few months in Vroomans class learning the different rhetorical schemes, fallacies, and concepts that gave me the ability to analis this social movement. 

*Connective-We are now going to get into analyzing the first source. 

Body

London's Slutwalk advertisement 

Schemes and Tropes 

  • Emphatics (Enumeration)

  • Question

  • Style(Bold)

  • Style(All Caps)

  • Emphasis(Color)


    Parlem and Titeca 


  • (Loci-Quantity- 

  • Facts/truths-Observed-Concrete data.-T  

  • Presence-Repetition-

  • Inclusion.

*Connective-

Primary Source #2

Schemes and Tropes: 

  • Consensus-

  • Anaphora-

  • Euphemism-

  •  Color-Value-

  • Focalizers-

  • Style-Bold

  • Style-Condensed spacing

  • Style All Caps-

  • Emphasis Underlying

Parlem and Titeca:

  • Quantity

  • Repetition 

  • Succession-Stages-

*Connective

Scheme and Tropes:

  •  scesis onomaton

  • Understatement meiosis

  •  Repetition anaphora

  • Type

Parlem and Tyteca:

  • The normal

  • Metabole

  • Analysis(Material)

  • Division

Conclusion

The Slutwalk movement has been instrumental in bringing awareness to rape culture and victium blaming. It started a conversation that women wanted and needed to have about their experience being sexually assaulted. The movement spread quickly and has continued to grow. However, it has yet to incorporate black women in their decision making leaving little to no space for them within the movement. The rhetoric of the term “slut” as much as they wanted to take control of the word and bring a new narrative to it failed to see how destructive this could be for women of all races and ethnicities who need to be incorporated in the movement for it to be fully successful. Growth for some women is not good enough anymore. 


Slutwalk slides