AG- Im going to talk about how coffee is one of the most popular items in the entire world to drink, people are very addicted to coffee, and how if you don't drink coffee how do you get your energy.
Preview- the coffee is a great thing to drink
Credit- coffee is amazing and should be in everyone's diet, it is very healthy for you to if you don't drink to much and add to much sugar and creamer.
Thesis- I have no idea yet
Connections- the girl grabs everyones eyes with the coffee and bright colors
How the ad can bring in many other people that don't already drink coffee
It seems as if you have some grasp of what is needed for the outline. A bit more detail could help sort out information and thoughts on how to proceed for this.
ReplyDeletecoming up with a thesis and other info is hard but once you add it all the other parts will fall into place so i would say just focus on that and then you can focus on other stuff but overall i would say it looks great
ReplyDeleteIt looks good so far! Just a bit short but when you expand, just look for a good message for the thesis and a whole conclusion. This is a rough draft though, and for the start it’s not bad at all! Just expand ideas and it’ll be great
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