Will Hicks Outline
INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter: You know, I like chicken
Thesis: This ad ultimately fails to really advertise Kellogg Corn Flakes.
Preview
- Points: Teens buying food. Focal points are confusing as well as the focus due to color contrast. The Fridge
BODY(ARGUMENTS)
Point One: Target audience (teen)
- Bread down the ad. What's displayed?
- Cereal bowl
- Clock
- Girl
Usually, the figure is doing something notable and worthwhile. What's so great about a bowl (of cereal) at night?
Point Two: Focalizers/Visuals
Girl -> cereal -> chicken? -> MILK?? -> EGGS???
Colors and contrast.
- usually red/white background
- trying to appear as if night, ruins the color theme of Corn Flakes
Point Three: The fridge
- Distracting.
- Its goal is clear upon thinking but requires too much work to come to fruition.
- Subliminal messaging
CONCLUSION
The ad ultimately fails in its goal.
Wrong audience
too many items in the frame
diverting too much from its traditional sense of ads.
REFERENCES:
Vrooman’s book, The Zombie Guide to Public Speaking
Vrooman’s Schemes & Tropes chart http://www.comm274.blogspot.com/
This is looking clean and concise which will make for a decently timed presentation. Be sure to cite all the sources!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a clean looking outline. Just don't forget your citations. Very excited to hear your argument.
ReplyDeleteThis was me ^^^
DeleteYour outline is very concise and to the point. I like how it is easy to follow. Don't forget to source within the speech.
ReplyDeleteThere isn't much I could say, these people have already said it all pretty much. Looks clean as hell, you keeps your points short and simple on the outline so I know you're not fixing to read off the outline word for word while youre up there. Your thesis is good, I've seen the ad at hand and I can say I can agree. Just cite i suppose
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