INTRO
Attention getter- Thanks for showing up! not really you messed up my plan for a free 100.
Topic/thesis- What does this ad want us to get out of
it?
Credibility- So from the many minutes I looked at
this ad.
Preview- I can tell you all about the schemes, tropes,
and Visuals this ad provides.
Transition-
So first all the schemes I have
SCHEMES
Tmesis- Tiger-ri-iffic and Gr-r-reat, explain that it emphasizes
how good.
Now
onto Tropes
TROPES
hyperbole- "The world's favorite kind"
(I would have to agree), The best to you each morning (my toilet
disagrees)
Now
we reach the good part
VISUALS
Closed- Milk is off-page and everything is close to
the border.
Low contrast- keeps this ad a steady orange-yellow to
match the vibe of the tiger.
all caps- They put in all caps the cereal name, his
name, and titles in the ad.
Icons- the tiger
Abstract- should we talk about the tiger holding 205
with 1 finger or how the banana is in the cereal?
So
now that we have covered the schemes, tropes, and visuals
CONCLUSION
We can go back to the question, what
does this ad want us to get from this?
I say to show us
how strong we can become and how flavorful those big brawny flakes of corn are.
We still don’t care for the banana.
We can thank Vroomans
chart and the ad itself for this grrrreat presentation.
CITATIONS
http://faculty.tlu.edu/svrooman/schemes2.htm
Looks like you've got the outline principles down from the book. I don't see too much of an argument here or the references. Dr. Vrooman wants those citations!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job hitting the main requirement points while keeping it as clear and concise as possible, which in the long run will make it easier for you to not read word-for-word off of your paper! Just don't forget to include a clear thesis, clincher, and citations then you should be good to go!
ReplyDeleteHey Rickey, this is a great outline, especially your outline (definitely going to polarize the room) I think some small changes is to clearly define your thesis and argumentative points. Also add your citations! A good clincher would also go a good mile.
ReplyDeleteI think it's a super good base outline for your presentation, if you plan to speak alot from off of the top of your head i think this could be good that way you don't have much to look down at and keep you from looking at the crowd. Great job.
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