Windy City Paranormal: Perelman
Thesis: Our company knows that ghosts probably
aren’t real, but we will hunt them for you anyway because it’s cool to believe
that they do exist.
Premises:
Facts/Truths
Supposed
Probable Data- They state that they come to investigate the “alleged cases of
paranormal or unexplained activity”. They also say that they will investigate
whether it’s from “natural causes or it is truly paranormal.”. This is saying
that there is not real proof that there are ghosts, but they will investigate
just incase they find something awesome.
Premise Modifiers:
Presence
Repetition-
All throughout the home page it repeats a lot about putting the clients mind at
ease about things that MIGHT be paranormal activity. It says it in six different
ways just on the home page that the cases seem to have natural causes before
any alleged paranormal activity.
Quasi-logical Arguments:
Autophagia
Retort-
They claim to be paranormal investigators… but right there on the home page it
says “taking information from the legitimate investigators that have gone
before us in this field”. They know they aren’t “legit” and are stating they aren’t
right up front. They want to be professional, but they are not doing a very
good job at it.
Premises:
Facts/truths
Supposed.
Probable Data- All of their data is probable data. It is paranormal things,
none of this is concrete. Even they state that it is not an exact science.
Everything is based off of things that might be happening, even if it is “caught”
on a recording or in a video. Any number of things could have caused sounds and
movement, but it’s just fun to that that it was from paranormal things.
Premise Modifiers:
Presence
Time: making
it feel urgent- I feel that all of the things they have recorded and are presenting
as probable data is presenting a sense of urgency. Keeping you on edge of what
you’re going to see or hear. And it makes you want to watch/listen to all of them.
Interpretation
Interpretive
Schemes- I think this is a good example of
this modifier. They really do limit the room for interpretation in the evidence
presented. Its all weird sounds and things moving in recorded content. So it’s
either natural, or paranormal, and the fact that they want you to believe that
it is paranormal makes it all the more relevant.
Establishing the Structure of Reality:
Example
Single-
in the recordings presented as evidence, a single noise is said to be useful
enough to prove true that there is indeed paranormal activity. Such as the man’s
cough in the recording where there are only women present. That cough could have
been anyone’s. Or buzzing in an old building. Ever think about bugs? Or a noise
coming from outside or down the hall?
I really liked your arguments and the one you chose. I think you will have a pretty strong thesis as well. Yo really broke down the pieces of evidence you picked and should be a good presentation.
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