Introduction
-Attention Getter
Preview
-Show Vrooman chart
-show ad
Thesis
Pepsi is trying to imply that if you buy Pepsi you get get stuff online.
Body
-first point
-Visual
- Color
- Animation
- Bold Lettering
- Flat perspective
- Closed space
Second Point
- Genre- Style
- Arrangement- Climax
Conclusion
- Restate thesis
- who was ad targeting.
I would be a little more specific in terms of this outline. It is probably beneficial to write more than “first point” for your Body section. You are nicely organized and have a great foundation. Make sure to include the citations and references.
ReplyDeleteThe organization and structure is there, now I would just look to be more specific with your overall argument just to give it more depth and context. Of course, be sure to include citations throughout the outline and look to find an attention getter and conclusion that works and is effective for you.
ReplyDeleteThe outline seems easy to understand and is well organized but I would recommend going into a little more detail or depth on what you are trying to say.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good outline, but I would include a little more detail. It's easy to understand and well organized, the only thing is the detail.
ReplyDeleteThis is a solid outline overall; however, one of my first suggestions would be to add transitions when appropriate. Additionally, your conclusion could use more than just restating the thesis and reiterating who the ad was targeting, you might want to include in your conclusion something you audience will remember. Finally, you sub points could include more specifics as not forget what you are attempting to communicate.
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