Intro
- Attention getter
Transition
Preview
- Introduce Vroomans charts
- Ad
Transition
Thesis
- Pepsi is showing that if you drink Pepsi then you can enjoy life and live for the moments around us.
Body
Main point one
- Discuss Visual aspects of the Ad
- color, light, focus, etc.
- Main point two
- Discuss Types within the Ad
-style, emphasis, etc.
Transition
Conclusion
- Reiterate the thesis and who the ad is targeting
This outline has all the characteristics of a great outline. Overall the conciseness of each point is exactly how you want it to be. One of the areas to be improved on is the need for citations. Citations could be easily added to this outline in order to relay them throughout the speech. The author’s argument is effectively conveyed through its main point throughout the entirety of the speech. You could also add more to your body as material wise it is brief.
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DeleteI think your outline looks great! It looks very organized with the right amount of material. I would just make sure that your argument goes a bit deeper than what is obvious about the Ad.
ReplyDeleteThis outline is incredibly organized. I found the main points to be easy to follow. Make sure to include citations and references as well as to come up with something as an attention grabber.
ReplyDeleteI really like how straight to the point, yet effective your thesis looks to encapsulate the rest of your outline. Structure and organization look good, as well. Just remember to add your citations the more you continue to work on your presentation and also try to brainstorm a memorable attention getter and conclusion to make your presentation as good as it can be, but this is a great start.
ReplyDeleteI think your outline if good. It's easy to read and understand. But I also think you could add a little more detail in case you forget something and need to remember what you were going to say.
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