Hailey Miller
1972 Hair Beauty Ad,
Head and Shoulders
Argument: Head and
Shoulders creates an ad that targets young teenage girls who deal with self –
esteem problems, stating that if they have head and shoulders products, having
gross hair is one less issue they have less to worry about.
Opener: Create an
idea, specifically girls, on how much society targets young teenage girls by creating
ads that pin points their flaws, then ask the question on how effective this ad
may have been during this time period.
Intro:
First discuss the
background effects and the colors involved with the ad
-the colors are calming
yet also very bright considering the tone of the ad
-blurred backgrounds
allow the viewer to focus on the young girl
-the appearance gives
an almost “twilight” look to the ad, allowing that deep, self - thinking
Secondly I will
discuss the fonts being used
-the fonts being used
is script, representing the approximate handwriting, this handwritten approach gives
a feel of familiarity to the viewer
Thirdly I will discuss
the realistic approach to the ad
-putting this real
image on the ad gives a relatable feel to possible girls
-the focus is on the girl
allowing viewers to put themselves in her shoes, and have that feeling of self
- doubt
-the ad allows a lot
of representationally, showing things that the viewers can identify with such
as any negative aspects they may feel within themselves
Conclusion:
The ad creates
a solid representation of what sexism was during this time period. Pointing out young girls flaws and offering
them products that can simply “fix” their physical problems and give them easy
solutions.
Hi Hailey! I think your main argument really ties in all of your points, and the conclusion you have sounds awesome (and true). I also think you have your thoughts really organized, just make sure that you'll have enough time to say everything. If I had one suggestion, it would be to add a couple transitions maybe between your introduction and first point, and then last point and conclusion. But otherwise, I think you have a great argument!
ReplyDeleteI think that everything in your argument ties together really well. All of the components of your argument relate back into your main point of what the ad tries to do. I think the length of it is perfect, it's well thought out but doesn't go on forever. The only thing I would say is to make sure you have your citations in the outline for the final product. Other than that, you did a great job.
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