OUTLINE FOR BRECK AD

·      Introduction: Has anyone tried cleaning their hair with baking soda mixed with apple cider vinegar? No one? Good! Me neither! That’s actually wonderful cause I’m here to talk about Gold Formula Breck instead

·      Delivery:

·      Argument: Why would a shampoo ad have to bring up detergent? Would that be another concern that women should have when it comes to their shampoo or would be another point to bring up to women since they are already “use to” using detergent since they are the ones who mostly wash clothes?

·      Organization: -Explain why we should care that Shampoo and this ad would have less       

                           detergent?

-Question why detergent should be a problem? To white women or women in general?

·      Conclusion: The AD wanted to include detergent because it already helps solve women’s problems. So including It in the shampoo as well makes it a two in one

·      Outline:

o   Intro: Attention getter- Original GoTo: Baking soda with apple cider vinegar.

o   Preview: Different formulas to wash hair (breck)

o   Body: Piece 1. Is Ad Sexist?

o   Piece 2. Is detergent in shampoo?

o   Piece 3. Why is detergent important to women?

o   Conclusion: Ad was trying to get women’s attention by also including other daily products that they use.