This blog will be filled with data analysis samples created by students in my COMM 274 class at TLU. You will see a variety of types of rhetorical analysis methods on display here.
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Outline Hope Ranch Poltergeist
Hope Ranch Poltergeist
Kronk- represents the forms of rhetoric that contribute to
the overall persuasiveness of the story.
Good arguments
and claims
Yzma- represents the forms of rhetoric that detract from the
overall persuasiveness of the story.
Bad arguments
and claims
T
X- Yzma
Misleading
vividness- an example of this from the story would be the overall vividness of
descriptions of the house, the weather, the things in the house and not the
vividness of the poltergeist or situation in the home.
Appeal
to misleading authority- “But Mrs. B_____ was adamant that I drop what I was
doing and come at once.” We don’t know who Mrs. B is, there is no mention of
credibility to back up the authority she is given in the story.
Post
hoc- the fallacy of attributing a causal relationship between a past and
present occurrence simply because one happened before the other. The example of
this from the story is “she broke up with her boyfriend” the stress and
negative emotions that came forth after her breakup were considered the cause
for the appearance of the poltergeist.
Hasty
Generalization- “The thing seems to dislike horses” The hasty generalization
and reasoning behind the poltergeist being present is that it doesn’t like
horses. On two occurrences a horse figurine and a horse picture were both moved
thus generalizing that the poltergeist is targeting horses because it does not
like them.
T
x- Kronk
Appeal to emotion- “I could feel the
underlying tension and fear.” After the writer steps into the house, they make
note of the tension and fear that they could feel coming from the women in the
ropom. This was a good example of Emotional Appeal because it backs up the idea
that there is something bad in the house that is causing negative feelings and
emotions.
Slippery
Slope- (1) The dislike for horses and (2) the breakup with the boyfriend caused
the poltergeist to appear. There were two instances where slippery slope was
present within this story. The dislike for horses is what caused the
poltergeist, and the stress and emotion from the daughter after her breakup
also caused the poltergeist.
Appeal
to consequences- “Most poltergeist phenomena last only three weeks or so.” “You
mean this thing could leave of its own accord?” “Yes, and never come back.” The
example of this from the story is a conversation between the owner of the house
and the author where the author states a poltergeist only stays around for 3 weeks.
The appeal to consequence was the strongest persuasive argument here because believing
in the poltergeist would mean that it would leave within three weeks. Where not
believing that it was a poltergeist would mean that they were stuck in a worst-case
scenario situation.
Wednesday, March 23, 2022
OUTLINE for Ghosts of Fort Tejon
ATTENTION GRABBER:
“Peter Le Beck, Killed by a X bear, Oct.17th
1837”
TITLE:
Ghosts of Fort Tejon
TRANSITION
THESIS:
Ghosts of Fort Tejon mimics many ghost stories based
off of events that have occurred in the historic areas. However, these ghost
stories like the Ghosts of Fort Tejon cannot be fully believable without actual
proof of existence and records of the events happening.
TRANSITION
CREDIABILITY:
I have no further knowledge of the Ghosts of Fort Tejon;
however, I have had experiences with apparitions in the past. For instance, the
house my aunts live in has a dark shadow apparition that stands 6foot tall and
his presence in the hallway makes you squeeze against one side as if there is
someone walking right next to you. The apparition roams my aunts house which
used to be my grand parents house before they passed, but we do not know who
this apparition is and why he projects negativity into his areas. Just like the
Ghosts of Fort Tejon this ghost’s backstory is unknown, but his presences is
not unfelt.
GRAPHS:
I have found the following in the Ghosts of Fort Tejon……
I have found that there are at least three key fallacies that play a role in
the story’s legend, along with 1 premises, 1 premises modifier and 1 Quasilogical
argument. In my observation the fallacies triumph other aspects of the
argument.
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CHART:
P-TO:
TRANSITION
PREMISES:
Observation
-The dates and the forts museum along with the
carvings in the tree and the graves on site
-The graves show that people were either killed or
died here. The museum shows the importance of the Fort.
TRANSITION
PREMISES MODIFIER:
Interpretative Schemes
-The story of the Ghosts of Fort Tejon.
-The story of Fort Tejon is limited and interpreted to
fit the ghost’s stories that explain the wandering apparition.
TRANSITION
ARGUMENT:
Quasalogical argument
Reciprocity
-The apparitions and the things that occurred at the
fort and the carving in the tree.
-The belief that the apparition is connected to the
carved Oak tree.
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FALLACIES:
TRANSITION
Appeal To ignorance
-The story is told of how a Christian women had the
soldiers dig up the bones of the Frenchman from the oak tree and give him a
proper Christian service and cemetery. So he wanders because he was not
Christian and his grave was desecrated…..
-There is no actual proof of this story or evidence to
check it. So it is believed to be true as a result of not having any evidence
to contradict it.
TRANSITION
Hasty Generalization
-The story being formed from the carving in the Oak
tree and the tales of interaction with Apparitions
-As far as the evidence goes there was someone killed
or buried by the oak tree and the stories of the apparitions are being
used to form the Legend of the Ghosts of Fort Tejon
TRANSITION
Cum Hoc
-The Girl feeling a disturbance by the several large
oak trees. The other girl who felt the stabbing pain before the small adobe
building.
-The girl walking near the several large oak trees
felt like there was a hanging there, so it must have happened. The girl who
felt the stabbing pain near the adobe building felt like a murder of assault
had occurred there so they must be connected.
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PICTURES
-gravestone of believed to be ghost of Peter le Beck
-Fort Tejon
CONCLUSION:
In conclusion I can see the justification of the
Ghosts of Fort Tejon is simply whether you choose to believe or not, because of
either actual experiences or interactions with the apparitions energy or
believing the tale itself, however I do believe in order to actually verify the
stories there needs to be more evidence and records of the event in order to
conclude the apparition roaming Fort Tejon is Peter le Beck longing to return
to his resting place and solve some of the questions formed, however the tale
of his discretion is simply just that a tale until proven true or false.