OUTLINE
INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter: Baseball (agree or disagree, the best sport every made) combine with cereal. AMAZING
Purpose: The ad appears to be showing a young baseball player and umpire of the game enjoying cereal knowing the score of the game must be really good for the team.
Qualification: (I) analyzing the ad
Preview: Main Schemes & tropes, Visual, Types in the cereal ad
Body:
Point one: Schemes & tropes
· Tricolon: Three parts for the saying, “Best Liked, Best Flavored, Worst to run out of”
· Repetition of one word: BEST
· Exaggeration to the cereal: the best to you each morning
Point two: Visual
· Eye-level, even with the people in the ad
· Representationally Identifying items such as the ball, milk, and cereal on table. Baseball player and umpire
· Varies colors of red background yellow table, black umpire suit
Point three: type
· Underlining for words in the ad, best and worst
· Text type not all the same
Conclusion:
Purpose: Analyze that the baseball player and umpire must be having a good game that during the time are enjoying cereal
Subpoint: mentioned Schemes & tropes, visuals, type of the ad
Clincher: Talk about a possible score of the ad
References:
Vrooman’s book, The Zombie Guide to Public Speaking
This looks really organized and you have a decent argument presented. Great job on the references! Be sure to utilize them in the presentation.
ReplyDeleteThis looks great! Just make sure in your presentation that you state your thesis! Excited to hear it!!
ReplyDeleteClear outline, looks llike you have you thesis under control. Looking forward to seeing how you deliver the clencher.
ReplyDeleteHey Cristina, I'm having a little trouble discerning your thesis. The statement made in the ad "they know the score" isn't actually referring to the score of an actual game in question, Rather referring to the "score" between Corn Flakes and other cereals. This point seems crucial in analyzing the ad for its effectiveness. Besides this point, your outline looks good.
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