Links to rhetorical tools:

Here are links to the rhetorical tools used in this class:

Schemes & Tropes -- Perelman & Olbrechts-Tyteca -- Fallacies -- Burke -- Rhetorical Toolbox -- Conspiracy Rhetorics

Thursday, March 4, 2021

Bigfoot outline CA

ATTENTION GETTER: How many of yall have a dog that barks at creatures outside? How many of yall are afraid of the dark?


PREVIEW: Christie Sproull, a 39 year old in Ohio has had multiple encounters with a bigfoot over the years, and these are her encounters in vivid detail. 


CREDIBILITY: This is my second class with professor Vrooman, and my second time using these charts so I am very familiar with identifying these now.


THESIS: Today we are going to look at the multiple encounters Christie and her family had with this bigfoot that was stalking their backyard and house.


BODY:

SPACE, MAKING IT FEEL CLOSE: “As i started to get closer, maybe 3 feet away, I heard something big shuffling in the briers.”


PRESENCE REPETITION: “It was very big, very tall, very wide.” And then again “

me very very tall, very, very wide.”



BANDWAGON : They both came back inside my son had the same description as me


WISHFUL THINKING: I told them the dog would bark and growl if something was out there.



EMOTIONAL APPEAL: “ It scared me so badly I was shaking and crying.”


 TU QOUQUE - The author did not believe any of the stories until they saw it himself. Example is “I never really believed them. I tried to convince them that there was nothing there”



CONCLUSION: This family has had multiple visual sightings in the same location with details that all match up. 






Bigfoot Presentation Slides

Note: I need to find a graph or a chart to put in the slide show

 

Bigfoot Presentation Outline

 Introduction

Attention getter

  • Is it a man? A bear? Perhaps a gorilla?

  • Harry and The Hendersons (1987) William Dear

  • Report #26604 (Fairbank County, Alaska) The Bigfoot Field Researchers Organization

Thesis

  • The witness of my chosen story saturates their story with many details and includes support from other people in a means of trying to persuade others that their experience was a genuine encounter with bigfoot.

  • Categories: People, Bears, and Gorillas

Preview

  • Fallacies, premises with premise modifiers, Vrooman

and the multiple argument types used. Perelman & Olbrechts-Tyteca

*Connective*

Body

Fallacies

  • Overprecision

    • More details = more credibility

  • Black-or-White

    • Bigfoot person with dedication?

  • Appeal to misleading authority

    • Put power in the hands of a second-hand, unwitnessed experience

  • Wishful thinking

    • Persists despite resistance from others

*Connective*

Premises with Premise Modifiers

  • Loci (Quality)

    • Their own unique experience is better than any other possibilities 

  • Values (Specific)

    • Good enough to them, should be good enough for you

  • Presence (Space)

    • Described in a way in which helps readers envision proximity

*Connective*

Argument Types

Quasi-logical arguments

  • Transivity

    • If I saw bigfoot, other people in the area must have seen bigfoot as well. Other people saw bigfoot, therefore bigfoot is real.

Based on the structure of reality

  • Succession (Decisive)

    • Promote story until desired conclusion is met

Establishing the Structure of Reality

  • Example (Single)

    • Their one experience is an example that they feel validates that bigfoot could be real.

  • Illustration (Presence)

    • Details encourage people to uses their imaginations to envision moment

*Connective*

Conclusion

  • Restate thesis

BigFoot Talking Outline draft

 Attention Getter: Why have over 10,000 people say they have seen bigfoot

Thesis: Bigfoot? 

Credibility: I have studied Vrooman's chart and


Term

Definition

Quote

Explanation

Presence modifiers

space making it feel close

“something very big ran across the road about 150yrds in front of us” 



They Used yard to make us imagine how close it would be to us

The likely

Some measure of (intuitive) statistical judgment.

We got out and I climbed the small incline that it had come down to investigate and after 30 min or so found a barefoot track 18” long x 7½” wide and got video of it.



They are trying to convince you by saying that they say a big footprint and if its not bigfoots that what else could it be so it makes you assume its bigfoot

Repetition

Say it again. And again. And again.

At around 3:30am I heard a very low grumble with a huff followed by what sounded like a lot of breath being pushed out and very close to the fire, maybe 30ft. At first I thought it was a bird or something, then, almost immediately another answered the first from across the clearing we were camped in directly behind me. I put my flashlight on where I heard the sound coming from and it would stop. 10 min later it would start up again. I don’t know why I didn’t get anyone up to listen with me but I didn’t. This went on for about an hour, until the sun started to brighten the sky and you could see a lot better



The Writer is constantly repeating himself to make sure you get an accurate understanding of how long it took for him to be able to experience it for himself and tell you about it and so you know that he isnt making thos up and it really took all night

Unlimited development

increased developments along a track continually increase value.


The first night was interesting as we continued to hear distinct wood knocking; they started at around 11:00pm. Most were far off and very fast, 4 to 7 quick, sharp cracks directly east of us that would echo across the valley only to be answered from another direction farther south


He Uses terms like first night, and second night to give you a timeline of gradually increasing events that eventually lead up to him seeing bigfoot

Example

Event/s reveal/s a rule or reality


The rule is that if everything that was said is real then bigfoot nothing else could make those noises or leave the prints that he has pictures of so it has to be real


Talk about the post


Conclusion: Re say thesis and other stuff 


Trevor Nealeigh- Presentation Slides Blog Post Assignment

 

































bigfoot pot chart









 

Bigfoot Outline First Draft

 Attention getter- Many of us have mystical creatures that we like to believe in such as Vampires, mermaids, Unicorns and even Bigfoot. 

Thesis- This article uses many different fallacies to try and get us to believe however I do not, and here is why. 

-Go over all the fallacies used- Tu Quoque, Appeal to ignorance, Emotional appeal, Hasty Generalization ect. 

-go over PO-T chart- Time, values, loci, space, division and superlative

-Talk about how he could have changed those fallacies- 

conclude that I do not believe in this story, however if some things were changed then so would my mind 

bfoot outline first draft

Attention getter: Big foot is it really real or is it fake. Well from this one posts id like to see this person does think he is.

Thesis: This made me want to believe in big foot but was too outrageous and this is why

  Credibility: Through reading this and using the fallacy chart that Vrooman provided.

 1.Fallacies;

Wishful thinking

Appeal to emotion

Accent

Begging the question

Hasty generalization

 2. talk about the posts and what it said

Conclusion: talk about fallacies and what was your overall preview of the story or posts.


Bigfoot slideshow presentation


CLICK THE LINK


 big foot presentation.pptx

Dior Ayala --- slide presentation













Tuesday, March 2, 2021

Steve’s Bigfoot Faillacies

 I would like to point out that I stumbled across a gold mine (quality not quantity) of argumentative fallacies within this very hectic and problematic Bigfoot experience account. Steve (Pavlik) is one hell of a man who claims more Bigfoot sightings exist in Washington than any number of bears... with a black bear population of 25,000 to 30,000 to be an asshole. I’m only being cruel because I have a reason to be, and I’m going to prove it below. And also because he used Bigfoot as a real and animal-like being to tell his story, and then in the very last paragraph he gets very specific about how he believes that Bigfoot is a “spiritual being”. An “entity with powers beyond our imagination...” 

FALLACIES, BABY. Let’s step into it. 

BEARS! (And Unrepresentative Samples

    “In reality bear sightings on the Lummi reservation are far less frequent than Bigfoot sightings” Wise words from our friend Steve. I would personally call this an unrepresentative lack of sample, although we can still use the fallacy to understand Steve’s comment. From my comment above about the real bear population in Washington, we know that there are indeed bears in Washington and in Bellingham, Washington (where Steve resides). I decided to look up all Bigfoot sightings in Washington, and I found that a man who has been tallying up the sightings over the past 30 years has accumulated just over 1000 sightings. Thank you Bob Filbey for clearing this unrepresentative sample up for us. 

Anecdotal Fallacy... Misleading Vividness

    Both stories told by Steve of his encounters with Bigfoot are extremely detailed, but still have no explicit confirmation of Bigfoot. He did not see anything at all, he just heard a loud cry that apparently woke all of the nearby dogs up, and saw a tree violently shaking just 20 feet in front of him while cleaning birds. He did however, fail to mention that he had a dog in the first story, but his dog, Robin, spontaneously appears in the second story. “Although all of this disruption was taking place less than 20 feet in front of me, I could see nothing due to the density of the brush and foliage. Robin, my Labrador retriever, who had been lying on the ground next to me chewing on a pheasant wing, also had leapt to his feet.” It’s just hard for me to believe that he left out the fact that he had a dog in the first story, but mentioned that all of the nearby dogs were barking and howling for 10 minutes after he heard Bigfoot “cry out”, Which makes me believe that he’s simply trying to be specific with his story, but sort of fell short. 

Quantifier Shift

    “The subject of Bigfoot often comes up in the classes I teach. Everyone, it seems has a Bigfoot story.” “Many of my students, for example, have had a Bigfoot encounters. Almost everyone knows someone who has seen a Bigfoot.” These are Steve‘s exact words. The first quote is taken from the very beginning of his blog, and the second quote is taken from the third to last paragraph. They contradict each other. “Almost” everyone used to be “Everyone” which I guess is actually flipped from the quantifier shift, but i think it still holds its meaning and Steve’s point. He is saying everyone has this connection with Bigfoot, and everyone knows someone who has had an experience with Bigfoot, so the encounters have to have this higher meaning... Have to mean that Bigfoot is justified. 

Ad Hominem

    “The Syfy channel continues to release movie after movie based on the theme of man-eating Bigfoots that terrorize teams of scientists or camp full of teenagers. -Both well-deserving targets.”  “I believe it to be a spiritual being, and entity that has powers beyond our imagination, including the power to shape shift, to change forms. It is for this reason we will never be able to scientifically prove their existence.” Holy shit this is hilarious. If an ad hominem is an “irrelevant attack on a person that makes one of their arguments false”, I think calling scientists a well deserving target of Bigfoot, then saying that scientifically, you cannot prove Bigfoots existence is a damn good ad hominem. 

Overall, I think that Steve really and invigoratingly believes in the spirit of Bigfoot. I am not trying to take this belief away from him, but his justification for his arguments, and the way he explains his story details are questionable for me, and the fallacies that help me strengthen my point are pretty clear for me. I think the universal understandings of data on bears outweighs the senses (mainly hearing, smell and sometimes sight) that tell a person that Bigfoot is afoot. 

Bigfoot argument analysis

 


Premises

Presumption

The likely

Some measure of intuitive judgement

WHEN MY FRIEND DWAYNE, WHO WAS DRIVING, TURNED TO GET ONTO OUR DIRT ROAD, I THOUGHT I SAW SOMETHING STANDING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ROAD UP AHEAD

Premise Modifier

Presence

Space

Making it feel close

NOW, I DON'T KNOW ABOUT ANYBODY ELSE ON HERE, BUT HE AND I, GOT A CHANCE TO SEE THIS THING UP- CLOSE AND PERSONAL, NO MISTAKING. THERE IT WAS, A BIG CREATURE STANDING "SMACK" RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ROAD. I WOULD SAY THAT OUR CAR WAS ONLY ABOUT 10-15 FEET AWAY FROM THIS THING.

Based on the structure of reality

Succession

Pragmatic

Evaluation of an act through consequences

AT FIRST DWAYNE, DID NOT HAVE ON HIS HIGH BEAMS, AND SO I TOLD HIM TO TURN THEM ON. NOW, LISTEN, WITHOUT THE HIGH BEAMS WE SAW THIS THING VERY CLEAR, BUT IMAGINE WHEN WE DID TURN THEM ON!

Based on the structure of reality

Coexistence

Prestige

A quality of a person known by his/hers effects

BY THE WAY, DWAYNE, WAS CONSIDERED ONE OF THE AREAS MOST FEARED GUYS

Establishing the structure of reality

Metaphor


Analogy where theme and phoros are condensed into a phrase.

WHEN WE GOT TO THE HOUSE IT WAS LIKE A STAMPEDE, BECAUSE WHEN WE GOT IN TO THE HOUSE, YOU WOULD HAVE THOUGHT WE WERE ON THE RUN FROM THE POLICE ! 

Based on the structure of reality

Succession

Direction

Doing B will slippery slope to D.

WE WERE AFRAID TO TO CALL THE COPS, BECAUSE WE DID NOT WANT THEM TO THINK THAT WE WERE CRAZY, AND SO WE KEPT QUIET. WE DIDN'T NEED ANYBODY TELLING US THAT WE MUST HAVE HAD SOMETHING TO DRINK OR WE HAD BEEN SMOKING SOMETHING.



Bigfoot fallacies

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