Attention Getter (narrative): Visual aid #1
When I was a kid I was disappointed when I understood all places had been discovered due to satellites.
mysteries are exciting
the idea that there are things that science hasn’t yet discovered
State my report
BFRO report #23696 (Class A)
Establish credibility:
Have been researching bigfoot, BFRO, charts for weeks
Visual aid #2 (connective)
Introduce main points:
Why people believe in bigfoot
Fallacies
Premises and argument types
Transition:
Let’s take a look at some reasons why people might want to believe in bigfoot:
Main point 1: Visual aid #3,#4,#5
Social construct (more likely to believe if your social group believes
Need to explain something you aren’t able to explain
Keeping mysteries and legends alive
Transition: Visual aid #6 (connective)
In this specific report we see the need to explain something and not be deemed crazy:
Main point 2: Visual aids #7,#8,#9
Fallacies:
Appeal to consequences
misleading vividness
Accent
Transition: Visual aid #10 (connective)
In order to convince us they’re not crazy, here are some of the rhetorical arguments made
Main point 3: Visual aids #11,#12
Premises:
Presumption
The likely
Premise modifier::
Presence
Space
Based on the structure of reality:
Succession
Pragmatic
Direction
Coexistence
Prestige
Establishing the structure of reality:
Metaphor
Transition: Visual aid #13 (connective
As we can see….
Conclusion: Visual aid #14
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Overall I feel that this is works sufficiently as an outline for your presentation. I do have a couple of questions regarding your outline however. I am struggling to understand what the thesis of your presentation is supposed to be. You discuss at one point in your outline that the visual aids are used by the author to convince his audience that he is not crazy. Is the thesis supposed to be centering on that particular idea? Additionally, your introduction about how you were disappointed when you understood that all places had been discovered due to satellites felt disconnected from the rest of the ideas featured in your outline. Aside from these few concerns, your outline has a good structure that just needs a clearer thesis to be based on.
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