Links to rhetorical tools:

Here are links to the rhetorical tools used in this class:

Schemes & Tropes -- Perelman & Olbrechts-Tyteca -- Fallacies -- Burke -- Rhetorical Toolbox -- Conspiracy Rhetorics

Wednesday, May 8, 2019

Final Post- British Suffrage- Madalin Kocian

Firstly, I would like to apologize for the blurry nature of the pictures of my excel documents showing my analysis. I just could not get the formatting to work by just screenshotting from excel, so bear with me. 
So on to my analysis. My main argument is going to be about how the shift in rhetorical language shifts the movement from peaceful protest to violence and even terrorism strengthens rather than weakens the movement for British Suffrage. In my presentation, I will be looking more into the spoken rhetoric rather than analyzing pictures and signs. However, I think that through my analysis of the sign pictures below this text I was able to really gain an understanding of the context behind the movement, and as this was the first critical moment in the fight for British Suffrage, I was able to glean the importance of this sign itself. As my analysis progresses, I found myself thinking more critically about the small details that influenced the audience while looking at this sign, and I think that is an overall reflection that can be applied to the movement at large. I chose to only include my analysis of this image because a lot of the themes and possible intentions uncovered could really be applied to most any sign found in this era, as well as some of the spoken rhetoric. The image I have analyzed is directly below and the analysis follows.
Image result for votes for women sign annie kenney


Feel free to comment if there are any suggestions on where this analysis could lead or if you had a different interpretation of anything. 
Madalin Kocian

Wednesday, May 1, 2019

Final Post 5_1 Urban Knitting




Argument:
A little of what I will be arguing is how well this action of urban knitting works as a social movement. Initially, people will share images of urban knitting on social media. Sharing the photos is a large part in how this movement spreads, but another part is for those people who participate in it. However, because this movement is so ambiguous in what it is critiquing, someone picking up the yarn to ‘yarn bomb’ might not realize the way it is critiquing a medium, a method of women used to silence them, used to have them sit in a corner somewhere and knit something for somebody. That subtlety is a little bit of what this movement is, however, because it’s purpose is so hidden does that make it a ‘social movement’.


Perelman’s Rhetoric of Argument:
Premises
Values
Agreed upon guides to actions
Sayeg’s guide to action was that she wanted to see something warm and fuzzy and human-like on the cold, steel, gray façade that she looked at. This is why she wrapped her door handle in a knitted cozy. Sayeg’s agreed upon action was to cover objects both large and small with yarn. It became an agreed upon action for her and others to continue covering objects with yarn.
Abstract
Not concrete: “truth” “justice”(?)

Specific
“True for me” “good for you”
Creating the knitted cozy for her door handle was good for Sayeg, it was true for her. It ended up being good for others [you] because there was an explosion of “yarn bombing” across countries.






Premise Modifiers
Presence
Drawing attention to premises
Premise… by definition an argument, theory, or undertaking on… Sayeg is “enhancing the ordinary, the mundane, even the ugly, and not taking away its identity or its functionality” (1:19). I don’t believe she is claiming there is something wrong with these items, simply stating that she has the ability to change its appearance because she can, and it makes people happy.


Argument Types
Quasi Logical Arguments

Definition
Identifying or linking an expression with a concept
Sayeg is linking an expression [her need to do something with her hands] to a concept [of covering the things in her neighborhood with yarn]
Analysis
Examination of definitional link.
There is a link between what Sayeg has started with “yarn bombing” to what people feel about it in other countries. After Sayeg started this movement, it was picked up in other countries large scale. It means something to people and this is something that Sayeg said she wanted to analyze.
Inclusion
Treating something as a part of a larger whole
“Urban Knitting” or “Yarn Bombing” has gotten so big that it is a part of a larger whole than Sayeg first initially thought it would become.


                                               
Fallacies
Bandwagon
A popular idea is correct.
After Sayeg started “yarn bombing” in 2005, it has crossed borders and has been picked up in multiple countries like Germany and England.
Emotional Appeal
Something is true because it makes us feel good or
untrue because it doesn’t.

Sayeg started and continued with “yarn bombing” because it felt good to her. It was an emotional connection, it appealed to her, and she continued chasing the feeling of doing something different, and making people notice.
Anecdotal Fallacy/ Misleading Vividness
A Hasty Generalization that relies on the availability heuristic ( we generalize from vivid stories more readily).
Sayeg covered a stop sign in her neighborhood. It caused people to stop and stare. She made the Assumption that they were staring out of wonder at such a strange sight. Some even took pictures. She generalized that it was a positive reaction.

Rhetorical Devices
Comparison Metaphor
An implied comparison.
If you think about our hands, these tools that are connected to us, and what they're capable of doing”


                                   
Toolbox:
Cyborg Theory:

Urban Knitting is shared through social media. It has spread across countries and is seen across the United States. People participate in the act of and sharing of Urban Knitting AKA yarn bombing and it fits with cyborg theory. Cyborg theory is in short, about the boundaries of yourself, who you are, being permeated by technology [i.e., social media]. Those who share posts or urban knitting online, influence, add to, push their social media character out of what they might normally be involved with and participate in a sort of political zone. The more you share, the more you are a part of the larger group.

Donawerth focusing on Madeleine de Scudéry:
For Donawerth and the female rhetoric she explored, I am using Madeleine de Scudéry to analyze the social movement of urban knitting. Scudéry was interested in how wit was applied to interaction in the form of a arguing back in a way that was allowed. It was their version of a polite critique, if you will and Urban Knitting fits it. Because Urban Knitting is so ambiguous in its message you can say that it is polite in how it critiques oppression of women in a silent way. It goes about by adding yarn around objects that cause people to stop and stare, take a picture and share and respond to it in a positive way without them realizing it. If the movement was sharing it’s message with a different format, say graffiti like Banksy, reactions would be different and you might lean more towards destruction of property and vandalism. Urban Knitting is the joke in the salon shop, that allows whoever uses it to save face using wit and a polite way of critiquing.                   

           
                                     
           


Final project blog post

Workers of the Fairmont Royal York Hotel in Toronto and they went on strike because of poor working conditions as well as working without a contract for extended periods of time.
Rhetorical devices used from their website:
  • Repetition: Repetition is seen throughout the entire website. They talk about the issues that are currently happening and you keep seeing “help our fight” or “please support us”.
  • Arrangement (climax) https://unitehere.org/fairmont-royal-york-workers-on-strike-in-toronto/: Throughout this article they arrange the wording to captivate the reader. They do this by stating what the strike will be about, where and when it will happen, and then finally they reel you in by saying there will be celebrities there and then listing out all of the speakers that will be there.
  • Facts/Truth: Facts and truth are used in the online media aspect of this campaign to gain attention and support from others. They state why they are on strike, and it’s for reasons such as how they get treated and how much they get underpaid in comparison to other hotel companies.
  • Values (universal): Values is a big part of the way that those on strike are able to gain support from those who are not involved with the strike directly. Both online and in real life use values by basically asking you to put yourself in their shoes and asking if you would want to be in that situation. They are asking you to help them fight against a much bigger opponent and you should help them fight because we are the good guys and those above them are the bad guys. They give many reasons why they should be helped and like previously stated, the way they word how they display their lives make it seem like you are being put in their shoes and that makes it easier for someone to want to support the cause.
  • Presence (repetition): Same as repetition
  • Justice: (See real life)

Rhetorical Devices from actual strike:

  • Repetition: Repetition is also used in the real life aspect of the strike. They repeat phrases over and over again during the strike to try and make their message stick in the heads of those in higher employment.
  • Facts/Truth: Same thing goes for the actual strike, during the strike the participants would speak about why they were on strike and give the same reasoning as the website stated, because they would have to withstand increased workloads, shift cutbacks (less money), and a dangerous work environment.
  • Values (Universal): (See above)
  • Presence (repetition): Same as repetition
  • Justice: Ahhh justice such a tough word to breakdown and see who is in the right and in the wrong, but don’t worry they make it very clear for you to see. The whole point of the strike is to be treated fairly. They want the pay, working conditions, treatment that they feel they deserve. Justice has to have another group to go off of and they give other hotel companies which they base this on. They compare the quality of their hotel to others and how much they get paid for the amount of hours they work and how much work they must do within those shifts. They also look at the amount of hours they are able to work and compare that with the other hotels.